InevitableSwing [none/use name]@hexbear.net to chapotraphouse@hexbear.netEnglish · 7 months agoNorway vs Sweden. This is as real as it gets, people.hexbear.netimagemessage-square39fedilinkarrow-up1105arrow-down10file-text
arrow-up1105arrow-down1imageNorway vs Sweden. This is as real as it gets, people.hexbear.netInevitableSwing [none/use name]@hexbear.net to chapotraphouse@hexbear.netEnglish · 7 months agomessage-square39fedilinkfile-text
minus-squareemizeko [they/them]@hexbear.netlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up9·7 months agoit’s clunky and awkward, but it does parse “Norwegians facing a shortage as Easter nears” is the subject, with an extended adjectival phrase
minus-squareLemmygradwontallowme [he/him, comrade/them]@hexbear.netlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up12·7 months ago Norwegians facing a shortage as Easter nears are hoarding eggs from neighboring Sweden We could phrase it more naturally like Facing a shortage as Easter nears, Norwegians are hoarding eggs from neighboring Sweden
minus-squareRedWizard [he/him, comrade/them]@hexbear.netlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up6·7 months agoIt needs commas I think. Norwegians, facing a shortage as Easter nears, are hoarding eggs from neighboring Sweden.
minus-squareTraschcanOfIdeology [they/them, comrade/them]@hexbear.netlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up1·7 months agodeleted by creator
it’s clunky and awkward, but it does parse
“Norwegians facing a shortage as Easter nears” is the subject, with an extended adjectival phrase
We could phrase it more naturally like
It needs commas I think.
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